(February 5, 2009) Good Start

Okay I think so far it's a pretty good start. I've done some editing and revising; I definitely need to go back and add more things in, especially in chapter one. The chapters are really short so I'm probably going to just smoosh some of them together when I get more into the story, but so far so good. :D

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